Friday, April 24, 2009

sketch 1st episode

  1. Overhead shot of Algebra sleeping on Moose: Crane up revealing partied-on deck
  2. Moose wakes up, flinging cat off himself while yelling "hot"/Moose thought bubble=fire
  3. Cat runs to and hangs out under bench
  4.  Wider shot of deck
  5. WS disheveled Santa flying of in night sky
  6. CU Moose talking/
  7. CU Algebra talking/lady filling food bowl
  8. FS Moose stretching
  9. FS or CU Algebra's ears perk up accompanied by sound of food hitting bowl
  10. Shot of Algebra talking
  11. WS of Moose walking to hide on deck
  12. FS of Algebra leaning against the door
  13.  Cut to moose
  14. Cut to Moose's perpective=the door opens.  A pair of Legs emerge (maybe this shot should be reconsidered as Moose is tall) and tosses some food in a bowl and grabs the other bowl.  Algebra begins eating.  The door opns again
  15. MS Algebra rolls over on her back 
  16. Low Shot:Algebra runs when human gets close and deposits water back on deck.  
  17. Moose Perspective: The human has an old fashioned ice pack held to her head as she goes to exit.  
  18. Low shot:  Another cat comes out gets tangled in the legs, and enters the porch.  Manchego, the new cat, approaches the food bowl and Algebra moves out of her way.
  19. CU mooses perspective:  Algebra eats only a little before sauntering around the deck,  Algebra resumes eating
  20. Cut to the Moose watching, he hears a loud thumping of a crash. He turns to look.
  21. Manchego jumps to the roof and looks down at the Moose from this vantage point. She says "Who are you? You're on my deck. Are you from my party?"
  22. Moose look up and says "I was a reindeer"
  23. Manchego "What are you anyway, you don't smell like a dog and you're too big to be a raccoon."
  24. (two shots intercut and the animals say their lines)
  25. CU Manchego appears to consider
  26. Manchego jumps into the bowl of Moose's antler
  27. Manchego walks to the moose's top of the head
  28. Shot of Manchego peering into Moose's face
  29. Algebra jumps back onto the roof and disappears over the roof
  30. Moose walks around to meet Algebra.  When he gets to the doorway, the door is now open and the bowl of cat food is full
  31. Moose pokes his head into the doorway. He has to turn his head sideways to accommodate his antlers
  32. Algebra is inside the kitchen, eating the inside food
  33. Moose turns his head back to the outside bowls and slurps all the water in one gulp.
  34. The Moose shuffles down the porch, and eats the dying plants
  35. CU:  Moose is chewing, plants are hanging out of his mouth and he chews and hollers:Who's that bitch? She was buggy.  He calls back into the kitchen.  
  36. Algebra walks out of the doorway and licks her face as she walks. She says: meal ticket
  37. Moose looks down at the full bowl of food in the doorway, reaching his head around
  38. Cu Moose looking at food, head low: That stuff looks like what comes out not what goes in
  39. Algebra says: better than grass.  Where is Algebra when she says this?  has she moved to sit somewhere?  does her face peer into the bowl with Moose?
  40. MS Moose tries some of the food
  41. CU Moose makes an appreciative evaluating face
  42. Algebra speaks again same q's about where is Algebra now
  43. WS of both Algebra and Moose on deck.  Moose says: I like this place. I think I will crash for a while..  Camera crane up to show wider view of environment
  44. FS of Algebra hiding under something (possibly under steps leading down, looking through cracks, perhaps having been there during this whole interaction) Says: Yes, you're warm. Stay
  45. END OF 1ST mini Story

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